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38 U. Tol. L. Rev. 1113 (2006-2007)
Effective Brief Writing Despite High Volume Practice: Ten Misconceptions That Result in Bad Briefs

handle is hein.journals/utol38 and id is 1127 raw text is: EFFECTIVE BRIEF WRITING DESPITE HIGH VOLUME
PRACTICE: TEN MISCONCEPTIONS THAT RESULT IN
BAD BRIEFS
Sarah E. Ricks* and Jane L. Istvan**
I. INTRODUCTION
T HERE is an art to writing effective briefs, and each brief is different. But
many ineffective briefs contain the same mistakes, regardless of the brief s
subject matter or the briefs intended judicial audience. One recent survey
revealed that more than 93% of the responding practicing attorneys and judges
(both state and federal) believed that the briefs and memoranda they saw were
marred by basic writing problems,' including a lack of focus (76.1%), failure to
develop an overall theme or theory of the case (71.4%), and failure to be
persuasive (66.4%).2 Another recent survey of 355 federal judges found that
judges are critical of lawyers' inability to use relevant, controlling authority to
their advantage.3
The demands of a high volume law practice contribute to these drafting errors.
A heavy caseload allows little time for the brief writer to achieve the critical
distance from the document necessary to edit and revise effectively.
In addition, many attorneys have misconceptions about the role of a judge that
lead to basic drafting errors. Because judges want the result of a case to turn on
the merits, rather than on which party hired the better lawyer, they sometimes
reach out in cases where the briefs are poorly organized and opaque to
independently divine the applicable law and record facts. However, it is not the
judge's job to sift through the advocate's possible arguments to determine which
argument is strongest or to figure out how the law applies to the facts of the case.
* Clinical Associate Professor & Co-Director, Pro Bono Research Project, Rutgers School of
Law-Camden. J.D. Yale Law School 1990, B.A. Barnard College, Columbia Univ., 1985. Thank
you to the Rutgers-Camden Clinical Faculty Scholarship Workshop for helpful comments on an
earlier draft.
** Senior Attorney, Appeals, City of Philadelphia Law Department, J.D. Yale Law School
1992, B.A. Univ. of Virginia 1988.
1. Susan Hanley Kosse & David T. ButleRitchie, How Judges, Practitioners, and Legal
Writing Teachers Assess the Writing Skills of New Law Graduates: A Comparative Study, 53 J.
LEGAL EDUC. 80, 85 (2003).
2. Id. at 85-86.
3. Kristen K. Robbins, The Inside Scoop: What Federal Judges Really Think About the Way
Lawyers Write, 8 LEGAL WRITING: J. LEGAL WRITING INST. 257, 264 (2002) (The judges seem to
think that lawyers can find the law, but they are not doing enough with it; the legal analysis in their
briefs is mediocre.).

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