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7 Scribes J. Leg. Writing 109 (1998-2000)
The Great Myth That Plain Language Is Not Precise

handle is hein.journals/scrib7 and id is 115 raw text is: The Great Myth That
Plain Language Is Not Precise
Joseph Kimble
Occasionally, when you try to convert from legalese to plain
language, someone will come forward and assert that you made a
mistake. You missed something in the translation. You inadver-
tently changed the substance.
Never mind that translating legalese - like translating a foreign
language - is no easy matter. Never mind that, despite the
difficulties, good writers have successfully revised countless legal
documents into plain - or plainer - language. Never mind that
many of these documents have involved tough subjects like
financial disclosure, corporate takeovers, and disability insurance,
not to mention the Federal Rules of Appellate Procedure, Article
9 of the Uniform Commercial Code, and various federal regula-
tions issued since the Presidential Memorandum on plain language.'
Never mind that for every inadvertent change, you could probably
identify several ambiguities or uncertainties in the original docu-
ment. Never mind that the revised document will almost certainly
be better - dearer and more accurate - than the original. The fact
remains that revising and clarifying a legal document always
involves some judgment and some risk.
See DIv. OF CORP. FINANCE, U. S. SEC. & EXCH. COmM'N, BEFORE & AFrER PLAIN
ENGLISH EXAMPLES AND SAMPLE ANALYSES (1998); LAW REFORM COMM'N OF
VICTORIA, PLAIN ENGLISH AND THE LAW app. 2, PLAIN ENGLISH REWRITE -
TAKEOVERS CODE (1987); DAVID ST. L. KELLY & CHRISTOPHERJ. BALMFORD, LIFE
INS. FED'N OF AUSTRALIA, SIMPLIFYING DISABIL1TY INCOME INSURANCE
DOCUMENTS (1994); Bryan A. Garner, The Substance of Style in Federal Rules,
CLARITY No. 42, Sept. 1998, at 15; Steven 0. Weise, Plain English Comes to the
Uniform Commercial Code, CLARITY No. 42, Sept. 1998, at 20; New Source
Performance Standards for New Small Municipal Waste Combustion Units, 64 Fed.
Reg. 47,275 (1999) (to be codified at 40 C.F.R. pt. 60) (proposed Aug. 30, 1999);
Leasing of Solid Minerals Other Than Coal and Oil Share, 43 C.F.R. pt. 3500 (1999)

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