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Do we need


charters for


Plain Language?

    Note,: The following is judge Hughes'
argument for the adoption of a Plain Lan-
guage charter by the attending members of
the Legal Writing Institute at the Univer-
sity of Puget Sound, Tacoma, Washington,
this summer. judge Hughes holds degrees
from the University of Alabama (B.A.),
University of Texas (J.D.) and University of
Virginia (LL.M.).

Bv JuDGE LYNN N. Huo.s
U. S. District Court, Houston, TX

    Can a charter help solve the problems
of legal writing, writing law, and lawyers'
writing? Can we legislate clarity, precision,
and brevity? Can a long slogan eliminate
pressures on the words of the law? Pressures
like: Delayed use, contextual shift, complex
subject, hostile audience, precedent-to-
habit, and economic constraint? Do bills of
lading need to have grace?
    Yes. Yes in the academic journal. Yes
in the court house. Yes in the boardroom.
Yes in the legislative hall.
    Niels Bohr, the father of the complex
and uncertain science of quantum physics,
said, in Danish, Even when the events
transcend the limits of classical physics, the
account must be given in plain language,


suitably supplemented by technical terms.
The law's quest for clarity and precision is
different but no harder than that of modem
physics,
    The common language of the law is not
the product of necessity, precedent, con-
vention, or economy, but it is the product of
sloth, confusion, hurry, cowardice, igno-
rance, neglect, and cultural poverty.
    Here is a quick checklist to help you
decide whether we need charters.
    - If you believe that substantive un-
fairness in consumer contracts will be
eliminated by plain language, vote no.


    If you believe that unfairness will be
made obvious, vote yes.
    * If you believe substantive complex-
ity in the law will be eliminated, vote no.
    If you believe that the necessary com-
plexity will be made concise, precise, and
lucid, vote yes.
    9 If you believe that bad writing is not
a problem with lawyers, vote no.
    If you believe that vague, obscure,
pompous, and protracted writing is a prob-
lem lawyers share with state legislators,
agency administrators, corporateexecutives,
                    - CCOINUM ON Pcx 6


Don't you see?
A tongue-in-cheek
proposal, page 2


  Dovetailing
  The key to flow
in writing, page 3


   Another Language?
Using ESL to improve teaching
   of legal writing, page 5


    PLAIN LANGUAGE RESOLUTION ADOPTED

    At the 1992 Conference of the Legal Writing Institute,
which has 900 members worldwide, the participants adopted
the following resolution:
    1. The way lawyers write has been a source ofcomplaint
about lawyers for more than four centuries.
    2. The language used by lawyers should agree with the
common speech, unless there are reasons for a difference.
    3. Legalese is unnecessary and no more precise than plain
language.
    4. Plain language is an important part of good legal writ-
ing.
    5. Plain language means language that is Clear and readily
understandable to the intended readers.
    6. To encourage the use of plain language, the Legal
Writing Institute should try to identify members who would
be willing to work with their bar associations to establish
plain language committees like those in Michigan and Texas,

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