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27 Pass It On: Newsl. Gov't & Pub. Sector Law. Div. 1 (2017-2018)

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          How Your Briefs Might Annoy Them, and

          How You Can Make Them Smile Instead

          By Ross Guberman


            f you're a government lawyer who writes briefs all the time, wouldn't you like to
            climb into the heads of the judges who read your briefs? I've basically done that for
          you by surveying thousands of judges, ranging from state trial court judges to U.S.
          Supreme  Court justices to learn many of their pet peeves. My questions touched on
          everything from formatting conventions to word choice, use of case law, treatment of
          facts, and strategies for persuasion. Their anonymous responses showed surprising
          candor and consistency.
             Some of the results are summarized below. Judges have their quirks, of course, and
          you should always follow court rules and individual judges' preferences. However, you're
          sure to make many judges happier if you follow this advice.

          Looks  Matter: Style Dreams
          Ever wonder what the average American
          judge prefers to look at all day? See below.

          1. Use the Oxford comma.
          56% prefer the Oxford comma
          21% prefer no Oxford comma
          23% don't care

          2. Put citations in the text, not in
          footnotes, unless the court suggests
          otherwise.
          78% prefer citations in the text
          12% prefer citations in footnotes
          10% don't care
             Sample comments: Don't want to have to
          look down to see citations. Sometimes
          they're not on the same screen when you're               ,,.    .
          reading electronically. Citations in foot-
          notes make you lose your place in the brief.
          (Note that as a compromise, you could include the caption and the court in the text
          while relegating the reference matter to the footnotes.)

          3. Include two spaces  after periods (sorry, one-space fans, but many  judges
          are traditional).
          62% prefer two spaces after a period
          21% prefer one space after a period
          17% don't care

          4. Do what  you want  with your  right margin, though  note that typography
          expert Matt Butterick  recommends   ragged,  which  is easier to read.
          35% prefer the text to be fully justified
          31% prefer a ragged right margin
          34% don't care

          5. Use italics, not bold, for emphasis, but use emphasis sparingly.
          76% say that bold or italics for emphasis is okay (though many stressed that emphasis

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