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TO: Lee S. Strickland @ DA
FROM: Edmund Cohen
OFFICE: OIM
DATE: 02/12/98 07:45:43 PM
SUBJECT: ARe: URGENT: Supp. Filing for JFK Board
Lee: Good paper, here are my suggestions.
1. The damage discilssion drawing upon field input is the stronger part of the paper and perhaps should
come at the beginning of the paper (just reorder the questions they asked us).
2. In footnote 15 I'd drop the Virginia Law Review. Doesn't add much and confusing since next sentence
talks about DOD OGC views which are relevant to Naval Proceedings not the Law Review.
3., Can we press the DO for the missing station response. It raises an unnecessary issue as to why
there was too little time to get a response from that station when we were able to get three other
responses from equally important or more important stations.
4. paragraph 17 line six - after word deepest think you should add the word official.
5. para 18 (first para of quote line 10) Addees add a [bracket] indicating what this means - we know, the
Board is likely to be mystified
Finally, in the affidavit, do we need to add some qualifiers about the classification review process. The
affidavit states:
If an article has been deemed to contain classified
information by its author, and it is subsequently requested to
be released, it will be reviewed by either the History Staff,
the Historical Review Program, or more recently by the
Publications Review Board -- pursuant to the personal
manuscript standards -- to allow declassification or the
creation of an unclassified version. By deeming or marking a
given article as classified, we represent only that this
personal writing contains some information of a proprietary
(hence classified) nature to the US Government; that fact does
not alter the nature of this private work or convert it into
an official federal record containing official government
information.
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