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5 Scribes J. Leg. Writing 51 (1994-1995)
Answering the Critics of Plain Language

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of Plain Language
Joseph Kimble
The price that any movement pays for even modest success is that
critics emerge. Critics can be healthy for a movement. They can
correct error, temper excesses, and prompt the kind of reflection
that deepens understanding. So it's probably a sign of progress that
there is debate about the movement for plain legal language.
Still, some of the criticism has become stale and should at last
be put to rest. The old criticism is, in essence, that we either
should not or cannot write in plain language: should not, because
it debases the language; and cannot, because of the overriding
demands of precision. I have looked at these misconceptions
elsewhere.' So have other writers.2 But since the old misconcep-
tions linger, I'll try to dispel them again here.
Meanwhile, there's a new criticism that deserves a longer look.
The new criticism is, in essence, that plain language doesn't matter:
its approach to communication is too narrow, and there is no
empirical evidence that it improves comprehension. These are
serious criticisms, and to explain why they are mistaken will
require some exploring.
The Old Criticism
The old criticism of plain language has come mainly from
within the legal profession. Again, these critics say that plain-
Joseph Kimble, Plain English: A Charter for Clear Writing, 9 THOMAS M. CooLEY
L. REv. 1, 19-22 (1992).
2 See, e.g., BRYAN A. GARNER, THE ELEMENTS OF LEGAL STYLE 7-15 (1991); LAW
REFORM COMM'N OF VICrORIA, PLAIN ENGLISHAND THE LAW 45-52 (1987; repr.
1990); Robert W. Benson, The End of Legalese: The Game Is Over, 13 N.Y.U. REV.
L. & Soc. CHANGE 519, 559-67 (1984-1985).

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